Overly Attached

Dear Diary,

Why do I keep torturing myself over Richard?  It’s been a month and I am still hung up on him.  Why can’t I just let it go.  Move on.  Start dating again.  I’m sure he has.  But nooooo.  Here I am in this lonely apartment, remembering every moment we spent here together.  I still sniff the shirt he left behind before going to bed.  It still smells of him.  How pathetic is that?  I go from room to room half expecting him to be there.  It’s like I’m chasing a ghost.  Except I’m the one doing the haunting.  I’m haunting the memory of what once was.  If anything, I’ve become a ghost.  A ghost of the living.  It just hurts so damn much.  Was I that difficult?  I don’t think so.  I just wanted to be with him you know.  Isn’t that what couples are suppose to do – be with each other?  Why did he say he was feeling smothered.  It wasn’t like I was stalking him.  So I surprised him at work to see if he wanted to grab some lunch.  I thought he would appreciate the spontaneity.  But he didn’t.  In fact he was really upset.  I don’t understand why.  And why didn’t he want to come with me to Angela’s party?  I thought we had reached that stage where we  went to friends’ functions together.  Was two weeks together too soon?  I just don’t get it.  Maybe I could call him.  Just to see how it’s going.  Yeah, I’ll call in the morning.  Maybe we could get a coffee.  Thanks Diary, you have always been there for me.  Always so easy to talk to.

Devoted to you, Amy

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This little sojourn into creepiness brought to you by Inspiration Monday.  What can I say, it’s what popped into my head.  I blame the rainy weather.

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16 Responses to Overly Attached

  1. djmatticus says:

    Nice use of the prompt. 😀

  2. Tara R. says:

    The first blush of a stalker? Yes, a little creepy. Nicely done.

  3. Entertaining writing there, Princess! It sucked me in from the first sentence. (Now I want to know what is going on in Richard’s mind)!!

  4. Dear Richard,

    Start thinking about a restraining order.


    Hehehe. A creepy one, and fun!

  5. elmowrites says:

    nice touch of insanity there, I like how sympathetic you make her at first and then, not so much! If I could offer a concrit, I think you could improve the flow by using contractions more (I’m, I’d etc). This is something I’m terrible at, so I’m passing on the lesson!

    • Good catch. I’m terrible at that when I write. I try to be aware of it, especially when writing dialogue, but during stream of consciousness it just comes out stiff. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

  6. Emilio Pasquale says:

    Not stiff at all. I was sucked in and thought this was really you! I’ve been through this- yeah even guys go through this kind of creepiness; feeling rejected and not understanding why and hanging on for way too long. Of course, that was when I was younger!

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